Night Terrors (finished)

Night Terrors (finished)

~~Anne~~

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05-04-2015, 08:20 AM

I like, this poem. There is a a lot Freudian content here with the "keep soft," "get swallowed," "bedsheets shelter water," "trunks of oak". It reads fast, moves along nicely. It feels a bit like a fantasy-dream sequence. No critique or criticism here.

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Night Terrors (finished) - by RiverNotch - 04-25-2015, 02:23 AM

RE: Vespertine - by Psyve - 04-25-2015, 11:06 PM

RE: Vespertine - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2015, 10:59 PM

RE: Vespertine - by Erthona - 05-02-2015, 07:04 AM

RE: Vespertine - by Brownlie - 05-03-2015, 04:54 PM

RE: Vespertine - by Anne - 05-04-2015, 08:20 AM

RE: Vespertine - by billy - 05-04-2015, 09:28 AM

RE: Vespertine - by RiverNotch - 05-04-2015, 12:56 PM

RE: Night Terrors (title change) - by RiverNotch - 05-27-2015, 02:33 PM

RE: Night Terrors (title change, edit 3) - by Animal Riots Activist - 05-28-2015, 06:51 AM

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