05-03-2015, 08:32 AM
(05-02-2015, 02:19 AM)shorexline Wrote: I loved this poem. I find a lot of connections to nature in my writing too, maybe because it's so inspirational. Is this poem about trust in a relationship? I immediately thought of some people's tendency to invade partners' privacy for validation of their mistrust. I think the last stanza was what made me think of this - not wanting your partner to "wake up" to catch you rummaging through their past... if so, the imagery of the mind as a wild jungle is really wonderful.Yeah you are completely correct. Thanks a lot for your feedback!