Alice in the Asylum: Psychiatric Transcript (Revision 5)

[Todd]

I'm returning to this one after some time. I wondered if doing a haibun structure would be the key to making this work. I realize these are not true haikus--not even slightly. I'm trying to do something different with this, and its possible the experiment isn't going to work. I'd appreciate any feedback. I keep finding myself coming back to this over the years, but I understand that I may not be improving it.

Thanks,

Todd