Visitor 15/3/15
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Quote:normally we don't approve one liner's but gave reasonable feedback on another poem so i'll allow this one and ask you do more than one liners in feedback forums. admin

I love the fractured narrative of the piece, it really conveys the chaotic nature of the subject matter. Good stuff.
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Visitor 15/3/15 - by Bearsy22 - 04-11-2015, 03:53 PM
RE: Visitor 15/3/15 - by wanderlust - 04-11-2015, 05:09 PM
RE: Visitor 15/3/15 - by hopefularahant - 04-15-2015, 12:43 AM
RE: Visitor 15/3/15 - by groberts01 - 04-20-2015, 08:38 PM
RE: Visitor 15/3/15 - by MrTurnipHead - 04-25-2015, 03:13 AM
RE: Visitor 15/3/15 - by Icon Zero - 04-30-2015, 03:20 PM



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