The Schism of Word and Number (Revision)
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(02-10-2013, 11:34 AM)Todd Wrote:  In the beginning was the word,
and the word was not the number.

The tree was also not a tree
with fruit blossoming
in metaphor. This was the way
of the word. It craved nuance.

The sun was light, and chariot, and unfolding flower,
a spark blown from the lips of God.
The distant moon, a veiled woman dancing
from her husband.

The animals would speak their names
to rejoice in each syllable
Giraffe was like the brook's happy gurgle.
Snake was as shadows at dusk.

Sin had not been defined.
The world was without census.

Or in the beginning was the null set.
Creation an equation
solved in 518,400 seconds
consisting of 332 perfect variables.

There was one then two,
addition became multiplication,
until the day of the first subtraction;
when an asset was marked
as a liability in the Holy Ledger.
Sin was a tally beyond counting.

The number can neither love
nor hate the word.
The word cannot abide the number.
They are parallel lines,
of orthodoxy and heresy
stretching beyond the call
of the final trumpet.

World without end.
Q.E.D.





(An edited poem from the chess thread with Brandon)
Hey Todd

I never noticed this one a it predated me on the site.  I am certain you have already worked past any true criticism i have to offer at this point but I did want to say that I think the title and concept are brilliant.
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Messages In This Thread
RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-10-2013, 12:14 PM
RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-10-2013, 12:30 PM
RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by cidermaid - 02-10-2013, 08:57 PM
RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by cidermaid - 02-11-2013, 03:00 AM
RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-11-2013, 03:35 AM
RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by cidermaid - 02-11-2013, 04:45 PM
RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-11-2013, 09:31 PM
RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Anne - 04-30-2015, 02:28 AM
RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 04-30-2015, 07:15 AM
RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by milo - 04-30-2015, 07:01 AM
RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 04-30-2015, 07:17 AM



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