APPLEWEED
#8
Thank you, Tectac,
Miscellaneous  is   probably where it is most aptly located, being a lyric.
May be wise to move  my other lyric here too at some point?

Mel, Grace
Thank you both for listening and responding to this.
I thought about the point you both make about the second verse, and perhaps a key change might be  a possibility.
I certainly see this as a single lyric ... in my understanding the content flows from one part to the other meaningfully. I guess the cloaking may not make that all that apparent.
Appreciate the time you both invested in this one.
-Psyve
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Messages In This Thread
APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 04-26-2015, 04:50 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by bena - 04-26-2015, 05:48 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by hopefularahant - 04-26-2015, 02:22 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 04-27-2015, 05:26 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by bena - 04-27-2015, 07:19 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Grace - 04-28-2015, 03:38 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by tectak - 04-29-2015, 05:45 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 04-30-2015, 03:55 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by rayheinrich - 05-06-2015, 07:42 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 05-10-2015, 04:03 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by rayheinrich - 05-10-2015, 10:14 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 05-10-2015, 01:26 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by rayheinrich - 05-10-2015, 05:39 PM



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