04-30-2015, 03:55 AM
Thank you, Tectac,
Miscellaneous is probably where it is most aptly located, being a lyric.
May be wise to move my other lyric here too at some point?
Mel, Grace
Thank you both for listening and responding to this.
I thought about the point you both make about the second verse, and perhaps a key change might be a possibility.
I certainly see this as a single lyric ... in my understanding the content flows from one part to the other meaningfully. I guess the cloaking may not make that all that apparent.
Appreciate the time you both invested in this one.
-Psyve
Miscellaneous is probably where it is most aptly located, being a lyric.
May be wise to move my other lyric here too at some point?
Mel, Grace
Thank you both for listening and responding to this.
I thought about the point you both make about the second verse, and perhaps a key change might be a possibility.
I certainly see this as a single lyric ... in my understanding the content flows from one part to the other meaningfully. I guess the cloaking may not make that all that apparent.
Appreciate the time you both invested in this one.
-Psyve
