04-28-2015, 01:50 AM
First of all, thanks to everyone for replying and taking the time to read my poetry! As happens with writing, i had no idea that this would prompt the replies it did. Thanks again for reading!
Now, just to clarify, the poem is about a car crash. (The title is T-Bone, "atop the (car) hood", "sirens"). Assembly was simply meant to mean the parts of a car. Though I realize now that while it was perfectly clear to me, seeing as i wrote it about something i witnessed, i was the only person who saw it. None of the readers were there with me, so i shouldnt have expected everyone to understand.
That being said, i didnt purposefully write this to be obscure, or because i get off on making people understand me and making my readers dig deeply into my "endlessly artistic mind". I write when i witness things i need to get off my mind, or i need to clear the air or take things off my chest, and i see how that can be conducive to some confusion. I post the poems more for s--ts and giggles more than anything else.
Thanks for reading!
Now, just to clarify, the poem is about a car crash. (The title is T-Bone, "atop the (car) hood", "sirens"). Assembly was simply meant to mean the parts of a car. Though I realize now that while it was perfectly clear to me, seeing as i wrote it about something i witnessed, i was the only person who saw it. None of the readers were there with me, so i shouldnt have expected everyone to understand.
That being said, i didnt purposefully write this to be obscure, or because i get off on making people understand me and making my readers dig deeply into my "endlessly artistic mind". I write when i witness things i need to get off my mind, or i need to clear the air or take things off my chest, and i see how that can be conducive to some confusion. I post the poems more for s--ts and giggles more than anything else.
Thanks for reading!