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APPLEWEED
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04-27-2015, 07:19 AM
Well...it does make more sense now that I've listened to (as far as rhyming scheme and meter go)--trouble is it is hard to critique a song as a poem. Overall I think it is still rather too much on the ambiguous side for me. Since I did listen to the song, I would like to say that as a musician, I would have loved for Part II to be a different tempo...since you are working within the same chord structure and melody. Just a thought.
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APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 04-26-2015, 04:50 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by bena - 04-26-2015, 05:48 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by hopefularahant - 04-26-2015, 02:22 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 04-27-2015, 05:26 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by bena - 04-27-2015, 07:19 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Grace - 04-28-2015, 03:38 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by tectak - 04-29-2015, 05:45 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 04-30-2015, 03:55 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by rayheinrich - 05-06-2015, 07:42 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 05-10-2015, 04:03 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by rayheinrich - 05-10-2015, 10:14 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 05-10-2015, 01:26 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by rayheinrich - 05-10-2015, 05:39 PM
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