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APPLEWEED
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04-26-2015, 05:48 AM
I need to come back to this when I have more time to figure it out. The rhyme is odd, (that one line out thing) and the meter is kind of throwing me atm...maybe this just needs more thought on my part. Some of the punctuation is a tad distracting (colon, semicolon) along with difficult words and concepts...makes this one I can't digest in just one or two reads. I'll be back, I promise.
love ya, mel. |
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APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 04-26-2015, 04:50 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by bena - 04-26-2015, 05:48 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by hopefularahant - 04-26-2015, 02:22 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 04-27-2015, 05:26 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by bena - 04-27-2015, 07:19 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Grace - 04-28-2015, 03:38 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by tectak - 04-29-2015, 05:45 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 04-30-2015, 03:55 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by rayheinrich - 05-06-2015, 07:42 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 05-10-2015, 04:03 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by rayheinrich - 05-10-2015, 10:14 AM
RE: APPLEWEED - by Psyve - 05-10-2015, 01:26 PM
RE: APPLEWEED - by rayheinrich - 05-10-2015, 05:39 PM
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