Visitor 15/3/15

[MrTurnipHead]

First off, I REALLY enjoyed this. I find the topic very interesting.

Visitor 15/3/15
Barged through door 1 like a time bomb
Door 2 was sliced with a Costa Card[Some of this is a bit unclear. Does it go to the next line?]
Kermit on her hand.
Diagnosis.
I was joking[Joking about what?]
I was wondering if you could escort me off the premises?
Not allowed. I’m sorry.
It’s her fault. Eyes are vague. Do I know you?
Do you know me.
Hello insomnia. Wrench out my hair. Step on my chest[Slightly cliche on "wrenching" the hair, but I liked it]
Someone pulled out the plug. The music’s stopped
You sit with a jug of squash between us. Don’t drink the tea. That one swigs the milk out the carton.[Maybe shorten this or expand it into 2 lines]
Large shuffling bodies in sleep pastels
Smoke privilege.
Dragons stare into space
1 pound 2 pound 3 pound
4
Put on the suit
Please hand your sharp objects over to me before you enter.
I’m the plumber. Come to fix your works.
You dislocating criminal.
I’ll be out next week
Kermit sings through the hands
She was a lecturer. Before.
I sip at the empty cup and look at the crimson lines. Brambles, I think. Not knife.Love this
HE RAPED ME.
She lived down the road.
THEY RAPE US WHEN WE SLEEP
5 pound 6 pound
7
no more
Don’t drink that, my dear. It’s poison
Stelazine breath
RUN
You stare blankly on.
THEY RAPE US
I should be out next week.

I love how disjointed this is and the tone. It definitely conveys "mental hospital"
Best