04-23-2015, 03:52 PM
This carries very strong expressions and emotions. I like the feel of "Because I am a Woman" -- it conveyed strength of character. However, you lost me with
The only way to be happy is to call for an uprising,
To fight an unholy war until I return to the soil.
Even as a metaphor, I found it distracted from the whole.
The only way to be happy is to call for an uprising,
To fight an unholy war until I return to the soil.
Even as a metaphor, I found it distracted from the whole.