Olive Tree
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Not going to lie, this poem sounds weirdly sexual for a poem that is ostensibly about a tree. Not bad-weird, it's just a strange feeling. Maybe I'm awful. But honestly, it's beautiful imagery. I can definitely imagine the way the olive wood feels, which is oddly like golden silk. It's definitely very sensual, and I'm sort of imagining a girl with dark hair, standing tall, but sort of bent into the wind, arms stretched out to the sky. It's beautiful.
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Olive Tree - by RiverNotch - 04-18-2015, 12:38 AM
RE: Olive Tree - by SnarlingThroughOurSmiles - 04-22-2015, 01:52 PM
RE: Olive Tree - by Brownie - 04-22-2015, 10:01 PM
RE: Olive Tree - by TimeOut - 04-23-2015, 05:19 PM
RE: Olive Tree - by RiverNotch - 04-23-2015, 06:01 PM
RE: Olive Tree - by RiverNotch - 05-04-2015, 12:17 PM
RE: Olive Tree - by Brownie - 05-10-2015, 02:57 PM
RE: Olive Tree - by Shem - 05-12-2015, 05:17 AM
RE: Olive Tree - by Mr. Creosote - 05-13-2015, 02:36 AM



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