The Party

[Mark D. Windmill]

That was a refreshing piece. I was anoyed at the use of the In line at the end of each paragraph by the 3rd stanza but it actually finished the poem really well. I feel like it would have much power to have it maybe only in the first and last paragraph. Really good use of words to create imagery and dualities. Like Dale, the subject matter did not particularly reach me but the overarching work was well done and well written.

Cheers