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[Erthona]

Crocus Verse

Tommy Hokum we can see,
that Crocus Martis poems a fartus 1,
for lack of polish it seems to be
"it's cock & bull so rip it a*" fartus partus 2.
"Quote he!"
Your lines like mine are not sublime,
if this poem was a woman, you'd be a wife beater,
it ebbs and flows with no reason or rhyme
from five feet to Heptameter.
It's trochee, no, iambs, accentual verse,
although some are inferior to it,
I really don't see how it could be worse,
half nostalgia the other half shit. 

So play your games little Tommy,
thinking yourself so smart,
you're not really impressive to us,
no more so than one of my farts!


Welcome to the site,


dale the weirdo


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1. Fartus: Germanic Latin
2. Partus: Bratin, a groanmance language
*"if it's cock and bull then just rip it apart* looked like an invitation to me.

Addendum:
 
"the beetle he's called lennon"
the Walrus, he is Paul,
George is playing sitar with Krishna,
and Ringo's beating balls to the wall.