04-14-2015, 01:39 PM
(04-14-2015, 12:34 AM)71degrees Wrote: If not "abandonment"...what might the poem suggest to you? Just curious...Im not sure exactly. In a way it makes me think of this documentary I saw on some Hippie types who were building sphere houses because "we've been living in rectangles too long"
but maybe, to me, the poem feels more about separation or intersections. I keep going back to "all these things interrupting other things" as a sorta thematic guide. I think about how everything relates to one another: the garden and its content to the house, the birds to the tulips, and both to the garden. Sacred geometry even comes to mind. 
