Summer Home

[Bearsy22]

I really like the seasonal changes per stanza. I thought that the use of the confined tadpoles was thought-provoking. An allusion to that liminal stage in youth where you just want to leave and grow. "Writhe" adds to this sense of painful impatience to get going. Then it gets to summer in stanza 3 and the world is smaller than they thought. Good job. You really told a story. Loved it!