By my Hand
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(04-09-2015, 10:17 PM)Grace Wrote:  
(04-09-2015, 07:08 PM)tectak Wrote:  By my hand I raised you, that you would stay by me.
We learned, each through the other, trust and  loyalty.
Never needing threat or force we understood that faith
lay in a brown-eyed passive stare but now an empty space
is where you lay  a'dreaming of every woodland chase;
but by my side, I make believe, you walk and understand
that though you sleep forever, peace was granted...by my hand.
Purdie the Dog
2005-2015
Hi. I have to admit, this poem brought a tear to my eye. It says so much in a few lines. There's a symmetry to it. It ends as it begins. Some poems you only want to read once. This isn't one of them. Thanks for the read, and re-reads :-) Grace
Thanks grace...editing through my own tears is a new experience...life goes on.
tectak
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Messages In This Thread
By my Hand - by tectak - 04-09-2015, 07:08 PM
RE: By my Hand - by Grace - 04-09-2015, 10:17 PM
RE: By my Hand - by tectak - 04-09-2015, 11:30 PM
RE: By my Hand - by Erthona - 04-10-2015, 03:22 AM
RE: By my Hand - by tectak - 04-10-2015, 04:12 AM
RE: By my Hand - by Todd - 04-10-2015, 04:14 AM
RE: By my Hand - by tectak - 04-10-2015, 04:17 AM
RE: By my Hand - by Tiger the Lion - 04-10-2015, 05:43 AM
RE: By my Hand - by tectak - 04-10-2015, 06:37 AM
RE: By my Hand - by LorettaYoung - 04-10-2015, 07:19 AM
RE: By my Hand - by tectak - 04-10-2015, 07:37 AM
RE: By my Hand - by LorettaYoung - 04-10-2015, 07:54 AM
RE: By my Hand - by Psyve - 05-03-2015, 10:09 PM
RE: By my Hand - by tectak - 07-01-2015, 06:28 AM
RE: By my Hand - by Mark A Becker - 07-01-2015, 07:16 AM
RE: By my Hand - by Daysleeper - 05-04-2015, 03:58 PM
RE: By my Hand - by tectak - 05-05-2015, 07:00 PM



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