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Turritopsis dohrnii
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04-09-2015, 12:05 AM
This is really brilliant...I got it, but I've also lost someone dear to Alzheimer's so I don't know if the connection is there because of it. The child splashing is a bit ambiguous though, with the sentence structure of the last S. Not really sure how to fix it...at any rate just wanted to let you know that I read and enjoyed.
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Turritopsis dohrnii - by jkprry - 04-03-2015, 05:26 AM
RE: Turritopsis dohrnii - by Brownlie - 04-03-2015, 03:58 PM
RE: Turritopsis dohrnii - by TimeOut - 04-04-2015, 08:20 PM
RE: Turritopsis dohrnii - by jkprry - 04-08-2015, 01:36 PM
RE: Turritopsis dohrnii - by bena - 04-09-2015, 12:05 AM
RE: Turritopsis dohrnii - by RiverNotch - 04-12-2015, 02:48 AM
RE: Turritopsis dohrnii - by Leanne - 04-13-2015, 04:50 AM
RE: Turritopsis dohrnii - by heslopian - 04-14-2015, 05:58 AM
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