04-08-2015, 01:36 PM
Brownlie: AH. GRAMMAR. (I like to pretend I'm e.e. cummings sometimes.) All the water/beach imagery is supposed to represent her mind,
the jellyfish being inside her mind. And I definitely agree with the 'age' comment. A cool thing about the Turritopsis dohrnii is that it reverts
to its adolescent stage in order to live forever. I'm trying to be ironic, but I probably haven't given the reader enough information. Thanks a bunch. :')
TimeOut: Thank god! Yes, Alzheimer's. I was wondering about "(she tries)". I will definitely put a keen eye to that last stanza too. Many thanks.
the jellyfish being inside her mind. And I definitely agree with the 'age' comment. A cool thing about the Turritopsis dohrnii is that it reverts
to its adolescent stage in order to live forever. I'm trying to be ironic, but I probably haven't given the reader enough information. Thanks a bunch. :')
TimeOut: Thank god! Yes, Alzheimer's. I was wondering about "(she tries)". I will definitely put a keen eye to that last stanza too. Many thanks.