04-08-2015, 12:20 PM
It was written from a blond males perspective, and true to the stereotype he sounded dumb. So evidently I succeeded in that respect, thank you for pointing that out. In the same vein the rhymes were intentionally forced and thank you for pointing that out If by trolling you mean the poem was written in a sarcastic manner, then the answer would be yes. The lines most often approached were iambic tetrameter, of course the poem was most likely written i accentual verse, of course there appears to be little consistency if one only counts the hard accented syllables, as reading this way will give the impression of a stumbling line.
Thanks for giving it a read,
dale
Thanks for giving it a read,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

