Why Am I Silent? - title change from Why You are Silent
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(04-06-2015, 01:04 PM)Lissa86 Wrote:  
(04-03-2015, 09:05 AM)LorettaYoung Wrote:  Why You Are Silent

Dark shadows call.
Black curtains fall.
My knees are weak.
Why don't You speak?
Why are You silent?

Then diamonds dress my destiny.
Blessed clouds of mist enlighten me.
DarkĀ fades to light when angels sing.,
and grace the grand and little things.
Why am I silent?

Again, the depth of darkness falls.
Days wearing black make frequent calls.
Dark spirits stalk and reap their prey.
A smirking demon creeps my way.
Why are You silent?
I enjoyed the ending of is piece, I'm not fond of the over rhyming in the beginning, but I'm a hypocrite because I use a lot of it in most my pieces.
Hi Lisa: Thank you for reading it and taking the time to comment. Loretta
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Messages In This Thread
RE: Why You Are Silent - by TimeOut - 04-03-2015, 03:34 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by LorettaYoung - 04-03-2015, 09:19 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by Wjames - 04-04-2015, 05:22 AM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by LorettaYoung - 04-04-2015, 07:11 AM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by Lloyd E Dixon - 04-04-2015, 12:39 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by LorettaYoung - 04-04-2015, 10:35 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by tectak - 04-05-2015, 01:02 AM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by Tiger the Lion - 04-05-2015, 02:08 AM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by tectak - 04-05-2015, 04:43 AM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by rayheinrich - 04-08-2015, 05:10 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by Grace - 04-08-2015, 08:14 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by LorettaYoung - 04-08-2015, 10:29 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by Grace - 04-09-2015, 12:19 AM



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