04-04-2015, 11:21 AM
(04-03-2015, 01:32 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Poetry in Real TimeThanks for sharing with everyone. Could be trimmed even more: (e.g. "it's, heavy"…comma after steps, you could delete "and"). I like this. Very fun.
It's not yet noon;
out my window
I hear the heavy heels
of staggered steps
and someone slurring--
no... singing:
“champagne don’t drive me crazy,
cocaine don’t make me lazy.
Ain’t nobody’s business but my own.”*
I smile. And share.
*"Nobody's Business But My Own" was written by Henry Fredericks.

