Poetry in Real time
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(04-03-2015, 01:32 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Poetry in Real Time

It's not yet noon;
out my window
I hear the heavy heels
of staggered steps
and someone slurring--
no... singing:
 
“champagne don’t drive me crazy,
cocaine don’t make me lazy.
Ain’t nobody’s business but my own.”*
 
I smile. And share.


*"Nobody's Business But My Own" was written by Henry Fredericks. 
Thanks for sharing with everyone. Could be trimmed even more: (e.g. "it's, heavy"…comma after steps, you could delete "and"). I like this. Very fun.
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Messages In This Thread
Poetry in Real time - by Tiger the Lion - 04-03-2015, 01:32 AM
RE: Poetry in Real time - by ellajam - 04-03-2015, 01:36 AM
RE: Poetry in Real time - by srijantje - 04-03-2015, 01:35 PM
RE: Poetry in Real time - by Erthona - 04-03-2015, 02:13 PM
RE: Poetry in Real time - by 71degrees - 04-04-2015, 11:21 AM
RE: Poetry in Real time - by Tiger the Lion - 04-04-2015, 01:24 PM
RE: Poetry in Real time - by Tiger the Lion - 04-15-2015, 04:01 AM
RE: Poetry in Real time - by RiverNotch - 04-25-2015, 03:15 AM



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