Miles of Dirt

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Miles of Dirt

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04-01-2015, 10:11 AM

I found this poem tricky to read at times, due to improper use of punctuation - or a lack thereof. Commas would help enormously, especially in the first stanza, in boosting the conciseness and credibility of the poem. It would be much easier to understand.

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Miles of Dirt - by Lucifer - 01-10-2015, 03:38 PM

RE: Miles of Dirt - by bena - 01-11-2015, 03:39 AM

RE: Miles of Dirt - by Lucifer - 01-12-2015, 07:44 AM

RE: Miles of Dirt - by shemthepenman - 01-12-2015, 08:39 AM

RE: Miles of Dirt - by Lucifer - 01-12-2015, 11:17 AM

RE: Miles of Dirt - by Erthona - 02-09-2015, 06:41 AM

RE: Miles of Dirt - by Lucifer - 04-08-2016, 03:00 AM

RE: Miles of Dirt - by BW BRINE - 02-10-2015, 10:05 AM

RE: Miles of Dirt - by Bananadon - 04-01-2015, 10:11 AM

RE: Miles of Dirt - by ellajam - 04-08-2016, 03:09 AM

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