04-01-2015, 10:00 AM
Is this poem about life's uncertainty? To me it was an accurate depiction of the unbeknown, and the fact no body knows when they are going to die. Shelf life for food products is so rigid and predetermined, whereas we, as humans, are subject to death at every corner.
Some bits sound really bad. "You never know who's gunna to be next" ???? 'Going to' or just 'gunna'. Make your mind up. HAHA! overall I enjoyed the poem, as it struck a chord with my love of death.
Some bits sound really bad. "You never know who's gunna to be next" ???? 'Going to' or just 'gunna'. Make your mind up. HAHA! overall I enjoyed the poem, as it struck a chord with my love of death.