After Depression

[Bananadon]

I once told someone, "to battle depression is to battle, at the same time, one's best friend and one's enemy.", it is something you must rid, it is a disease; I understand this just 'flowed' out of you, but a poem on depression, for me, could be so much more heartfelt and also emphatic. You could go into great detail on 'how the battle was won' - or soMething like that. I did enjoy the poem, but this is my first critique so I apologise if I have not been too helpful