03-31-2015, 10:45 PM
(03-31-2015, 11:51 AM)srijantje Wrote: no,I really meant,why not change the first line toI'm playing w/the word "habit"...that's what shore waves do. Not so much "habit" I guess; I'm sure there's a geological term for wave movement, but I chose "habit" as a piece of clothing and a word for what waves do. Call me weird. '
like white collared nuns
walking
in dark habits
[what habits would they get into?]
I do like your suggestion of first line, though. Thanks.

