Reluctant Flower-edit 2 (Erthona, ellajam, Psyche)
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Hi: thank you very much for your thoughts and time. Here the word pine would mean to languish. I will definitely revisit that line, again, about "lost in the mail". I think the entire first couplet together, as descriptive, is the introduction. Yes, the last stanza is in different form from the rest; I do experiment. Thanks again, Loretta
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RE: Reluctant Flower - by first_high_of_the_day - 03-17-2015, 01:58 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by LorettaYoung - 03-17-2015, 02:40 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by ellajam - 03-17-2015, 07:46 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by LorettaYoung - 03-17-2015, 08:32 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by Erthona - 03-18-2015, 12:08 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by LorettaYoung - 03-18-2015, 04:20 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by Erthona - 03-18-2015, 05:40 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by milo - 03-18-2015, 06:06 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by billy - 03-18-2015, 03:16 PM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by LorettaYoung - 03-18-2015, 11:25 PM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by Erthona - 03-19-2015, 03:51 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by Erthona - 03-29-2015, 05:06 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by LorettaYoung - 03-29-2015, 08:02 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by ellajam - 03-29-2015, 08:20 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by LorettaYoung - 03-29-2015, 08:42 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by Psyche - 03-29-2015, 11:44 AM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by LorettaYoung - 03-29-2015, 09:49 PM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by Erthona - 03-29-2015, 09:56 PM
RE: Reluctant Flower - by LorettaYoung - 03-29-2015, 10:18 PM
RE: Reluctant Flower-edit 2 (Erthona, ellajam, Psyche) - by LorettaYoung - 03-31-2015, 09:32 PM



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