In Arcadia
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Hey 71. The only hiccup for me is that you have 2 adjectives - yellow/shuttered before the proper name of "St. John's". Almost reads as if there might be another St. John's church near Hwy 63 that may or may not be yellow shuttered. Is "St. John's" needed. Reads better to me without it. Also, personal opinion... I would prefer the full word "highway". It reads that way regardless.
Nice image.
Paul
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In Arcadia - by 71degrees - 03-31-2015, 09:20 AM
RE: In Arcadia - by just mercedes - 03-31-2015, 09:39 AM
RE: In Arcadia - by 71degrees - 03-31-2015, 10:46 PM
RE: In Arcadia - by Tiger the Lion - 03-31-2015, 09:41 AM
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