In Arcadia
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Good immediate glimpse of place and time. 'There are' is a bit passive for me - maybe 'Three willows stand ...' or something like that. Did you mean it's a yellow church with shutters? Or a church with yellow shutters? I like that the sorrow has passed from memory, but the trees are still there. Thank you!
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In Arcadia - by 71degrees - 03-31-2015, 09:20 AM
RE: In Arcadia - by just mercedes - 03-31-2015, 09:39 AM
RE: In Arcadia - by 71degrees - 03-31-2015, 10:46 PM
RE: In Arcadia - by Tiger the Lion - 03-31-2015, 09:41 AM
RE: In Arcadia - by srijantje - 03-31-2015, 12:00 PM



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