Indian Summer

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Indian Summer

I'm so sorry
I slept so late,
sedated by yesterdays' indifference.

C'mon, 
wake up.
Let's go do something.

Don't care for the "so, so, do" combination. I'd edit all of them. And I also agree w/Voker about the children's aspect. That's not a bad thing, mind you. It just sounds like something a kid would say. That's why I would be tempted to shorten this even more. (words to edit: so, so, do, yesterday's, something). Short and choppy and let's go, let's go makes this exciting to me. Dragging it out w/adverbs bogs it down.