03-31-2015, 06:59 AM
Cj, thanks. You make some good points. The 3rd strophe can indeed be made meatier. The last line is giving me fits but I hope hope to resolve it.
Brownlie, thanks for the reminder about the vignette thread. I have read it before and it was very helpful with another piece. I will revisit it for sure. I think you're also correct about expanding on the sound.
Thanks for reading guys.
Paul
Brownlie, thanks for the reminder about the vignette thread. I have read it before and it was very helpful with another piece. I will revisit it for sure. I think you're also correct about expanding on the sound.
Thanks for reading guys.
Paul