Scattered Leaves
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Wait, wait, wait--something weird's going on in the narrative here . . . Well, dad-gummit. I'm always leary about editing, anymore, bc my crit style's so overbearing, but it's the only way I know to really get into a poem so . . . apologies in advance . . .
A yak is normal.
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Scattered Leaves - by Leanne - 03-29-2015, 06:40 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by Erthona - 03-29-2015, 07:26 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by ellajam - 03-29-2015, 07:35 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by just mercedes - 03-29-2015, 07:35 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by Leanne - 03-29-2015, 07:49 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by billy - 03-29-2015, 08:25 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by Leanne - 03-29-2015, 08:30 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by nakedwonder - 03-29-2015, 09:30 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by billy - 03-29-2015, 07:07 PM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by Leanne - 03-30-2015, 04:47 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by billy - 03-30-2015, 07:16 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by ellajam - 03-30-2015, 05:11 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by crow - 03-30-2015, 05:04 PM



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