03-30-2015, 07:32 AM
its cliche upon cliche, with forced rhyme that tries to be something it isn't
thoughts please isn't a title. have it moved to novice and give it a title. don't be afraid of what people will say. at this point in your writing career you're going to receive some knocks to the ego. use them to learn how to improve your poetry.
thoughts please isn't a title. have it moved to novice and give it a title. don't be afraid of what people will say. at this point in your writing career you're going to receive some knocks to the ego. use them to learn how to improve your poetry.