Thoughts please!
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Is it really real, this feel
That I’m feeling?
Do my eyes see what they see
Or do they deceive me?

For the birds are still at song
As though they’ve not heard
What went wrong
Sky still blue, moon white
Inside me, no fight
Knocked out
Of the love bout
With a single punch
Sent packing without lunch
And what about this feeling?

“Don’t pay it any mind
It was just her revolving door
That you went through
and through some more
Hit you in the behind, you’ll find
The earth’s still in spin my friend
Out as you came in,
The end!”

But no,
I’m changed
Deranged
By the exchange
My real love
For her fake
A story of heartbreak

This ache needs solving
So fetch that gun revolving
One time ‘round is all it takes
Unlike her door
It can’t ask for no more
And with that, a widow it makes
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Messages In This Thread
Thoughts please! - by nakedwonder - 03-30-2015, 02:10 AM
RE: Thoughts please! - by milo - 03-30-2015, 02:52 AM
RE: Thoughts please! - by nakedwonder - 03-30-2015, 03:23 AM
RE: Thoughts please! - by milo - 03-30-2015, 03:40 AM
RE: Thoughts please! - by billy - 03-30-2015, 07:32 AM
RE: Thoughts please! - by Erthona - 03-30-2015, 08:32 AM
RE: Thoughts please! - by shemthepenman - 03-30-2015, 08:55 AM
RE: Thoughts please! - by Balor1712 - 06-10-2015, 10:34 AM



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