Why dove?
#7
just to reinforce what others have stated;

to much cliche and bad syntax
the bad syntax [yoda speak] forces the end rhyme and destroys the natural rhymes of what the poem should read like.
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Why dove? - by SaddestStates - 03-27-2015, 01:23 AM
RE: Why dove? - by Tiger the Lion - 03-27-2015, 01:56 AM
RE: Why dove? - by LorettaYoung - 03-30-2015, 08:55 AM
RE: Why dove? - by Erthona - 03-27-2015, 02:54 AM
RE: Why dove? - by summermoose - 03-27-2015, 08:17 AM
RE: Why dove? - by just mercedes - 03-28-2015, 06:23 AM
RE: Why dove? - by Leanne - 03-29-2015, 06:36 AM
RE: Why dove? - by billy - 03-29-2015, 10:26 AM
RE: Why dove? - by first_high_of_the_day - 03-31-2015, 05:33 AM
RE: Why dove? - by Hitler - 04-01-2015, 03:38 PM



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