To be, Just be

To be, Just be

nakedwonder
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03-29-2015, 09:37 AM

this one got through by the skin of it's teeth, we need better feedback this we want to see the why's and hows of what you thought/mod

Great! I thought this was a very good poem. I thought the ending was particularly strong, a small twist on a very stale (from overuse!) phrase - to be or not to be ... Thanks for sharing!

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To be, Just be - by summermoose - 03-19-2015, 06:53 PM

RE: To be, Just be - by groberts01 - 03-19-2015, 08:56 PM

RE: To be, Just be - by LorettaYoung - 03-20-2015, 05:15 AM

RE: To be, Just be - by billy - 03-20-2015, 04:02 PM

RE: To be, Just be - by Daroma - 03-21-2015, 09:06 AM

RE: To be, Just be - by summermoose - 03-21-2015, 04:47 PM

RE: To be, Just be - by jasmine.m.wardiya - 03-22-2015, 04:36 PM

RE: To be, Just be - by kwokfreya - 03-28-2015, 05:34 PM

RE: To be, Just be - by summermoose - 03-29-2015, 03:33 AM

RE: To be, Just be - by nakedwonder - 03-29-2015, 09:37 AM

RE: To be, Just be - by staciamberdawn - 06-06-2015, 03:04 PM

RE: To be, Just be - by tectak - 06-06-2015, 05:53 PM

RE: To be, Just be - by jasmine+clovers - 06-06-2015, 07:14 PM

RE: To be, Just be - by Sharramon - 08-19-2015, 10:20 AM

RE: To be, Just be - by Misanthrope - 08-19-2015, 04:55 PM

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