Shore Waves
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(03-29-2015, 07:53 AM)71degrees Wrote:  Like white collars
of nuns
walking
in dark habits
mmmm

walking stopped me at first, but it gives it the sense of movement that make the visual work so well.
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Shore Waves - by 71degrees - 03-29-2015, 07:53 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by ellajam - 03-29-2015, 08:02 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by 71degrees - 03-31-2015, 09:10 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by Tiger the Lion - 03-31-2015, 09:15 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by srijantje - 03-30-2015, 11:43 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by just mercedes - 03-31-2015, 09:16 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by srijantje - 03-31-2015, 11:51 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by 71degrees - 03-31-2015, 10:45 PM



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