An Old Book
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I think it is quite interesting for the metaphors you have used. I think maybe it is better to use “dust” to describe yourself as you wrote that “I am not the greatest man”, and the girl is the “reader” who keep reading the books, and you are willing to settle like a dust on the book to accompany the girl.
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An Old Book - by BW BRINE - 02-26-2015, 12:46 AM
RE: An Old Book - by 71degrees - 02-28-2015, 01:40 AM
RE: An Old Book - by BW BRINE - 02-28-2015, 11:27 AM
RE: An Old Book - by 71degrees - 02-28-2015, 12:14 PM
RE: An Old Book - by Ryan_Toscano204 - 03-13-2015, 10:10 PM
RE: An Old Book - by summermoose - 03-26-2015, 12:58 PM
RE: An Old Book - by SaddestStates - 03-26-2015, 05:38 PM
RE: An Old Book - by billy - 03-26-2015, 06:35 PM
RE: An Old Book - by kwokfreya - 03-28-2015, 05:53 PM
RE: An Old Book - by BW BRINE - 03-29-2015, 05:34 AM
RE: An Old Book - by cjchaffin - 03-29-2015, 11:36 AM



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