03-28-2015, 05:23 PM
Hello,
I am new to this forum too and this is the first poem I read in this discussion board. I really like "Lips say more when unattached to words."this line. I think it is an emotional piece, but maybe it would be more attractive for readers if you can use more metaphors to describe the characteristic of maintaining an intimate relationship without speaking. Keep it up!
I am new to this forum too and this is the first poem I read in this discussion board. I really like "Lips say more when unattached to words."this line. I think it is an emotional piece, but maybe it would be more attractive for readers if you can use more metaphors to describe the characteristic of maintaining an intimate relationship without speaking. Keep it up!