An Old Book
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i see the metaphor but i think it needs more clarity elsewhere

(02-26-2015, 12:46 AM)BW BRINE Wrote:  I am not the greatest man,
so she says: "you are here". where is [here]?
She will settle like the dust from here everything works well for me though settling like dust is somewhat cliche
on an old book,
re-read too many times to open up again.

-BW BRINE
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An Old Book - by BW BRINE - 02-26-2015, 12:46 AM
RE: An Old Book - by 71degrees - 02-28-2015, 01:40 AM
RE: An Old Book - by BW BRINE - 02-28-2015, 11:27 AM
RE: An Old Book - by 71degrees - 02-28-2015, 12:14 PM
RE: An Old Book - by Ryan_Toscano204 - 03-13-2015, 10:10 PM
RE: An Old Book - by summermoose - 03-26-2015, 12:58 PM
RE: An Old Book - by SaddestStates - 03-26-2015, 05:38 PM
RE: An Old Book - by billy - 03-26-2015, 06:35 PM
RE: An Old Book - by kwokfreya - 03-28-2015, 05:53 PM
RE: An Old Book - by BW BRINE - 03-29-2015, 05:34 AM
RE: An Old Book - by cjchaffin - 03-29-2015, 11:36 AM



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