softwater stone
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hmmm I am wondering now if this is a magma traveling either down a hill...or magma traveling up through the ocean. Hard to tell, could be totally wrong on both counts, but I wish I knew before commenting, since this is in serious, I'd love to go into line by line, thorough critique. Shot me a pm so not to influence the comments of others criting.
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softwater stone - by jasmine.m.wardiya - 03-22-2015, 04:44 PM
RE: softwater stone - by bena - 03-24-2015, 01:56 PM
RE: softwater stone - by Erthona - 03-26-2015, 08:12 AM
RE: softwater stone - by RooktoKing - 04-01-2015, 01:11 PM
RE: softwater stone - by jasmine.m.wardiya - 04-01-2015, 08:46 PM



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