03-21-2015, 06:07 AM
(03-21-2015, 03:48 AM)milo Wrote:
As strong as they seem, I could lift more than 1000x an ant's body weight.
Glad you liked the poems, perhaps they warrant revision.
It depends what you mean by revision. If you mean revision as in 'to reconcider and change' then that is pretty funny. Like, 'oh YOU like them... maybe I should change them then'
. But anyway, these poems are really great, and they are two of three poems I have read recently that have kind of lit that spark in me.