Pendulumly

[billy]

great try with meter, the last like feels a bit of a cock up though, a more emotional take on tempus fugit; the poem has the beat of a clocks pendulum and the title works well in being the metronome that guides the poem, needs a small edit but well done. oh [time flies is a bit of cliche. seing as the rhyme needs a fix, would it be hard to edit the line as a whole and make it more in time with the rest of the poem?

Start with the words from heart of the wise
Sacrifice meaning with excuse-fused lies
Bend with the lows and cheer with the highs half a foot missing off the meter here. a suggestion would be [to bend wit..]
Wash out wash in, sure to move with the tides
Circumstance of the moon dictates my mind the rhyme here feels to far off to be a half rhyme or a whole one
Feeling up this time, but tick tick time flies