03-17-2015, 02:11 AM
Billy wrote: "i think it's a truism of sorts, specially on a site like this."
That's why I let I let Tharmas write these, he's very big on "Truth."
"you mean like my cat poem
"
Surprisingly no, I wasn't thinking of your poem, per se. Although it does seem to apply, especially as to how it was critiqued. With the exception of the "plug" I don't believe much else was mentioned about the content. The focus was completely on the form, but I just considered your poem more of a form practice piece anyway. No, what I was thinking about was some poems I had read recently that relied completely on the form to cover over the completely deficient content and lack of meaning. Tharmas has another along these lines and I will post it shortly in missile-anus if deemed worthy. I rarely let Tharmas write as he is such a pedantic and dull fellow. He does not write poetry, just these parable things (horrible things).
dale
That's why I let I let Tharmas write these, he's very big on "Truth."
"you mean like my cat poem
" Surprisingly no, I wasn't thinking of your poem, per se. Although it does seem to apply, especially as to how it was critiqued. With the exception of the "plug" I don't believe much else was mentioned about the content. The focus was completely on the form, but I just considered your poem more of a form practice piece anyway. No, what I was thinking about was some poems I had read recently that relied completely on the form to cover over the completely deficient content and lack of meaning. Tharmas has another along these lines and I will post it shortly in missile-anus if deemed worthy. I rarely let Tharmas write as he is such a pedantic and dull fellow. He does not write poetry, just these parable things (horrible things).
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.