Baby, It's Cold Down Here

[71degrees]

The only suggestion I have to change 'waits' in this list, personally I'd go for 'fights'... it's not a big issue as the wait,wait, wait,wait picks up on a theme.

as an asthmatic waits for breath,

as a diabetic waits for insulin,
as a paraplegic waits for legs

I rather like the mixture of American cynicism with a certain brand of mediaevil fatalism

Jeremy Young,

Thank you. I can support some kind of mixture, I guess, as an asthmatic might "fight" for a breath, but not sure a paraplegic "fights" for legs in that same sense. Same w/diabetic...they must "wait" for insulin, not fight for it. Thanks, again.