thanks guy's. i like the idea of plug instead of stop. i also see the merit of mentioning where it actually was. in truth it stood for years on the rights till my partner tidied up my desk (there has to be a poem in there somewhere 
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some of toms punctuation ideas look better than mine so i'll check them over.
i'm pretty much still with -en nickles though i'll think about the meter on that line and may do something with the rhyme if i change the en
thanks for the heads up on the couplet dale. will also sort out the end rhyme of
Some days I turn my pockets inside out <------
then counting up the change I sing the blues.
)some of toms punctuation ideas look better than mine so i'll check them over.
i'm pretty much still with -en nickles though i'll think about the meter on that line and may do something with the rhyme if i change the en
thanks for the heads up on the couplet dale. will also sort out the end rhyme of
Some days I turn my pockets inside out <------
then counting up the change I sing the blues.