03-16-2015, 07:14 AM
The only suggestion I have to change 'waits' in this list, personally I'd go for 'fights'... it's not a big issue as the wait,wait, wait,wait picks up on a theme.
as an asthmatic waits for breath,
as a diabetic waits for insulin,
as a paraplegic waits for legs
I rather like the mixture of American cynicism with a certain brand of mediaevil fatalism
as an asthmatic waits for breath,
as a diabetic waits for insulin,
as a paraplegic waits for legs
I rather like the mixture of American cynicism with a certain brand of mediaevil fatalism

