Filling the Pussy

[tectak]

Filling the Pussy

There is a wonky headed cat that's stood "wonky-headed" or the whole cat is wonky and headed. Hard to avoid the emphasis on "is" without reverting to "there's" , so buggering up your meter. Leave as is and L1 and L2 become your spoken word template. Anywhoo, it works for me.
behind my puter screen, just to the right. p'haps 'puter?
It's laden down with coins; not bollywood OK so far  but I see the problem looming...so do youand it's is correct
en nickels or, lead pennies dullish bright. Instead of "en" you could up the descriptor density with, say "stage" or "prop nickels" So
" It's laden down with coins; not bollywood
stage nickels or lead pennies, dull  not bright." Still OK? Your poem and you DID ask about emphases. Enough...and  bollywooden is cute.

A five or single peso piece I pop
into a slot within it's arching back, "up on", two words rather than "within", wrong word...but you know your pussy and where her slot is.but its here
above a plastic-belly buttoned stop Again. " above a plastic belly-buttoned stop"
that's nestled near a de-glazed hairline crack. Just fuckin sweet, billy. Sweet

So far I haven't saved enough to buy
a house, a car, a bike or pair of shoes; Period. This sentence is done to a turn.
It hurts to let my sleeping coinage lie ...but if you still have that semicolon, here would do.
I'd much prefer a prostitute or booze.
Some days I turn my pockets inside out
then counting up the change I sing the blues. Love it. Love it. Generic blues ending. Dah dah de dah dah de dah dah de do.

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i'm still not sure about the fem rule, as it is i have a line with 5 and a half foot ending with a fem followed by a 4 and a 1/2 foot line beginning with a stress. the cat is actually on the right of my table but who cares changed bollywooden to
''''''bollywood
en nickles
after leanne pointed out the cocked up rhyme.

No real problems here, billy. Don't stress over stress. Just read it out loud. You should hear yourself.
Best,
tectak