03-15-2015, 07:56 PM
bastard yes.
originally i had
It's laden down with coins; not bollywood-
en nickels or, lead pennies dullish bright.
and felt it too gimmicky.
i tried to create an oxymoron. i can come up with something else should it fail.
thanks for the feedback
i just read the rest of your post
i'll do as you suggest
originally i had
It's laden down with coins; not bollywood-
en nickels or, lead pennies dullish bright.
and felt it too gimmicky.
i tried to create an oxymoron. i can come up with something else should it fail.
thanks for the feedback
i just read the rest of your post
i'll do as you suggest