Irish
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(03-15-2015, 10:12 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  
(03-15-2015, 09:48 AM)71degrees Wrote:  Love it!

It is so cold
this day her lips - shouldn't this be  lip's or lips' ?
imprint freezes
on my cheek

I rub it
for luck
Warm sentiment conveyed with cold words. Well done.
Paul
Thank you, Paul. "lips'"...you're probably right, just didn't look right to me.
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Irish - by 71degrees - 03-15-2015, 09:48 AM
RE: Irish - by Tiger the Lion - 03-15-2015, 10:12 AM
RE: Irish - by 71degrees - 03-15-2015, 11:41 AM



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